ext_80431 ([identity profile] twistedm.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] reira 2008-02-14 02:03 am (UTC)

so gorgeous. i love draco's large, masculine hand. big enough that perhaps he hasn't quite finished growing into his adult body. or perhaps he's simply got large and powerful hands. i love his fist, too. just that small glimpse is definitely a picture that evokes a lot of words.

your bare harry is sexy and i want to see more of that naked pelvis. yet i still sense the withdrawn, uncomfortable sadness in him. it's in the twist away, the covered eyes and blocked jaw.

and the two of them, still dressed, in bed? whoa. draco pulls away, harry follows. draco's left hand isn't clutched into a fist, but i still see tension and wakefullness in it. he doesn't look relaxed at all. and i like the way you've drawn harry's eyes. i can't tell whether or not they are closed, and i like the implications of that.

bravo. so well done. all of it.

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